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wolf girl
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since 2007-12-03
Posts 150
washington, US

0 posted 2007-12-16 07:26 PM


this is just a start. it needs work. im not sure where to go with it. help please.

are you ever scared you will be forgotten?
that you will just disappear?

does anything make sense anymore?
i sit here and write these poems
i have no other way out of these threatening domes
my feelings go no where except on this blank page
no one else is willing to listen

im waiting for things to make sense maybe they never will
i want to kill the feelings im feeling
it hurts so bad im kneeling
so many questions in my head
where am i to be lead?
how am i to answer them?



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fromme2U
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since 2007-11-09
Posts 257

1 posted 2007-12-18 01:18 PM


Damn! nice flow, very good
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