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Teen Poetry #8

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jayjara
Member

since 2007-05-02

Posts 90
Florida

0 posted 2007-06-17 07:03 PM

Awoke in time for sharing food
with a man, a former emcee.
Scrutinizes now under debris.
Looks, smells, hears just like me, but
helpless with his ration in hand,
a cane in the other to aid his stand.
Rather tall in his soiled blankets
that reach the earth,
eyes of ash gape and
salute jets with mirth
flying so low, reminisces his worth.
I appreciate the shapes made,
the innocence of neighbors,
waving for attention with our arms;
Arms of the world,
with dirt under nails,
hammered to the destruction and
trapped, but by no means releasing the grip
until washed away, in an eloping way.

-J

RenaissanceRomanceRunsRed
Senior Member

since 2007-06-11

Posts 1062
In Love <3

1 posted 2007-06-17 08:45 PM

"in an elopeing way"
that is poetry. hahaha. no really. loved it.

humm makes me want to read more of your stuff- you continually suprise me j.

-Red

Inigo Montoya: You seem a decent fellow. I hate to kill you.
Westley: You seem a decent fellow. I hate to die.

jayjara
Member

since 2007-05-02

Posts 90
Florida

2 posted 2007-06-18 10:27 PM

No problem
Thank you.

-J

surf_painter
Member

since 2007-04-10

Posts 434
Canada

3 posted 2007-06-18 11:31 PM

this was just so i don't know how to describe it it was just amazing and beautiful and meaningful and all the other good fuls that you can think of i loved it

Clockwork_Orange
Senior Member

since 2007-03-23

Posts 620
Space Camp, IN

4 posted 2007-06-19 12:38 PM

dude, this was reall rad. your good.

and if you think im goin soft, scroll down a page and read "dragged down below"

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