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Our Poem |
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Richy Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 3050
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Our Poem is the crackle of withering time against the cobblestone path and, the waning eclipse of pilfered moments It’s the rush of tomorrow’s miscues amidst yesterday’s future lingering, with the blush destinies; of solid oceans It’s the stirring echoes of ripened fruit, and the carnal fragrance of prophetic smiles It's the color of joyous moans dripping down silent silk onto naked want, and hearts laughter It's the hidden embrace of a borrowed memory, and a stellar coupling tempered, by locked up promises It’s the immortal anguish of, helpless desire and, unfeasible completeness Our poem, is us Freedom of expression is our, write. |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
oh Rich... how beautiful your writing is! love RDB Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight......... |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Good morning, Richy! When I got to the closing line, I literally got a little tingle and sighed 'Oooo, how delightful'! Actually, I had a tingle or two during the entire reading of your poem! Fortunate be the one for whom you write! May your "poem" never end!   Linda |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
awww... this makes me all mushy! |
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steavenr Member Elite
since 2003-11-17
Posts 4058 |
the tribute you make to another is lovely...well done |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
Got that right! Wonderful write! Jimmy |
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shyvl Senior Member
since 2008-04-11
Posts 531texas, usa |
I wish I could quote some verse that moved me to ecstasy, but I simply couldn't choose. Your choice of imagery left me breathless. sharyn |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
It's the hidden embrace of a borrowed memory ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ That is a lovely thought, and you are such a fine poet, Sir~ |
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Temptress
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-06-15
Posts 7136Mobile, AL |
another awesome read for me this morning Geesh...You are now a member of my library  "...buried way beneath the sheets |
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Richy Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 3050 |
Thank you so much everyone. It sure is nice to be back here. Been a little extra busy these last couple of day. Will be back real soon to catch up on all the wonderful new poetry. Have a great day. Rich |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
felt like a romantic walk, hand in hand. "too bad ignorance isn't painful" |
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