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JamesMichael
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0 posted 2008-02-14 04:04 AM


Never Let Me Go

My darling is so sweet, sweet sweet
everytime we meet, meet, meet,
she turns on her charms
and melts into my arms
and holds me like she'll
never let me go...
but when she does she walks around
like she's the beauty queen of Chinatown
giving me cute side glances
that encourage love and romances.
My darling, my darling,
my very precious darling
I could love you for a million years
if time would only allow me too.
Time, if you would be
so kind please do.

JamesLee
14February
2008

Happy Valentines
Day My Darling.
I believe in you.







© Copyright 2008 JamesMichael - All Rights Reserved
Roniece Dawson-Bruce
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1 posted 2008-02-14 04:47 AM


ooh James.. you romantic you!   loved this RDB

Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight.........

Margherita
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2 posted 2008-02-14 08:08 AM


Happy Valentine's Day to you, dear James, this is very lovely!

love
Margherita

Earth Angel
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3 posted 2008-02-14 08:43 AM


What woman wouldn't want a Valentine's Day poem like that?!? ~ and a Valentine like you?


Linda

Lordadon
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4 posted 2008-02-14 10:51 AM


Great job on this, happy valentines to you.
passing shadows
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5 posted 2008-02-14 11:17 AM


awwww

this is sweet James

Kristabell
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6 posted 2008-02-14 12:41 PM


Wonderful write. Thanks for the smile.

K

JamesMichael
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7 posted 2008-02-16 02:53 PM


Thank you Roniece, Margherita, Earth Angel, Lordadon, passing shadows and Kristabell for the wonderful responses....James
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8 posted 2008-02-16 11:02 PM


Loving this, I am, James.
iliana
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9 posted 2008-02-17 12:23 PM


What a sweet, sweet, sweet Valentine!  Enjoyed, James Lee.........jo
jwesley
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10 posted 2008-02-17 12:28 PM


Nice James...may it always be so.

j.

Charisma
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11 posted 2008-02-17 03:31 PM


what a sweet, sweet valentine poem you shared with us.

Charisma

JamesMichael
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12 posted 2008-02-19 05:25 PM


Thank you Alison, iliana, jwesley and Charisma for the wonderful responses...James
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