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kaile
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0 posted 2008-07-28 12:53 PM


on my latest blog post,
laid a comment I
nearly missed:
I'm honoured to be part of your montage!

that comment extended itself
to make me grin goofy;
it served as the only link to a
forgotten friend from seasons past

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Margherita
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1 posted 2008-07-28 12:58 PM


to make me grin goofy


That's exactly the reaction one might expect
for such a lovely surprise.

Love,
Margherita

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2 posted 2008-07-28 01:23 PM


What a lovely happy story!  I, love the whole poem, but like Margherita, I, too, especccccccially love the line "to make me grin goofy"!  It fits the mood of the poem perfectly!  

Thank you for lighting up my day!

- Owl

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3 posted 2008-07-28 01:50 PM


see the effect that grin has on others?
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4 posted 2008-07-28 02:50 PM


Nodding with Kacy! You're a charmer, for sure kaile!

But for me, it is those laughing eyes!



came back to add, I had to read this thrice--because speaking of eyes, mine are rapidly deteriorating and even after reading twice, I thought you'd written mortage instead of montage!

Sheesh. And I can never find my glasses. (Yes, my eyes are that bad.)


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5 posted 2008-07-29 12:17 PM


You don't have a goofy grin. Ok, yes you do, lol!

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6 posted 2008-07-29 11:36 AM


haha. thanks for sharing this grin
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7 posted 2008-07-29 12:15 PM


What a really strange coincidence it was that Karen should have mentioned your laughing eyes in this particular poem!  It was after reading this very poem - and I don't remember what made me do it, if there was even a reason - but I covered up the bottom half of your face to see if your smile reached your eyes - and OF COURSE it did!  

- Owl

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8 posted 2008-07-29 12:34 PM


Diana, haha. thanks for telling me so. erm, i was thinking how overwhelming my picture must be. lotsa people tell me that i have really big eyes. guess that is not an issue here! haha
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