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Gaelynsgirl
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since 2008-07-18

Posts 175
Ont. Canada

0 posted 2008-08-18 11:37 AM

Speak to me of passion
When my wings are filled with air
And heights do not starve
This sensibility,
When courses run beyond
The limits set by those
Who cut the ribbons,
who tinder them
with raw blind emotion.

Speak to me of passion
When blood runs hot
Upon the pavement of desire
Free from cycling endlessly
In never-ending roadmaps
Of life.

Speak to me of passion
When all that is within
Explodes upon the page,
Upon the canvas,
Upon the air,
In notes that scream
Their birthpangs
In palabratic colour
And sonorous dimension.

Speak to me of passion
When winds give rise
To change and all I need to do
Is catch one breath
And ride it home.

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

1 posted 2008-08-18 07:24 PM

quote:
Speak to me of passion
When winds give rise
To change and all I need to do
Is catch one breath
And ride it home.

Very captivating, dear Lynda, and the conclusion is fantastic.

Love,
Margherita

"Love is the One who masters all things;
I am mastered totally by Love."
(Rumi)

Earth Angel
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since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

2 posted 2008-08-18 07:26 PM

The one who speaks to you of passion, is in for the ride of their life! lol

Linda

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

3 posted 2008-08-18 07:27 PM

Nice...James

Marge Tindal

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since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

4 posted 2008-08-18 08:25 PM

Lynda~
'Speak to me of passion
When winds give rise
To change and all I need to do
Is catch one breath
And ride it home.'

Ride on ... ride on~

I like this idea very much~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~
Email - noles1@totcon.com

Gaelynsgirl
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since 2008-07-18

Posts 175
Ont. Canada

5 posted 2008-08-18 09:09 PM

Margherita, Linda, James, and Marge... You made my day, or rather, my evening! I don't think people get into expressing themselves poetically unless they care passionately about living! May it touch each of our lives so deeply that we can't help but share it!

hugz....
and thanks,
Lynda

scorpio eyes shut
Junior Member

since 2008-07-24

Posts 31
kerala, india

6 posted 2008-08-19 12:20 PM

those wonderful last lines simply took my breath away!!

Gaelynsgirl
Member

since 2008-07-18

Posts 175
Ont. Canada

7 posted 2008-08-19 08:21 AM

I'm glad you took the ride SES... I know you know that breath. It's how I imagine a magic carpet ride only better! Sharing the experience with people just makes it that much more.

with smiles
Lynda

Dark Stranger
Member Patricius

since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

8 posted 2008-08-19 10:23 AM

Can imagine you on this adventure chasing the dream with hungry in your eyes

Gaelynsgirl
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since 2008-07-18

Posts 175
Ont. Canada

9 posted 2008-08-19 10:49 AM

A little bit of hunger can go a long way, can't it dark. I hope I'm never satisfied; with who I am, with who I can become, with how much passion there is in my life and in my writing--and I know I can go the distance if I don't let go of the tail of that breath...

To believe in oneself as others believe... that would be such an achievement.

hugs and thanks for that lovely comment...
Lynda

Alison

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since 2008-01-27

Posts 9318
Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy!

10 posted 2008-08-21 02:02 AM

Lynda,

You carried me with you on the breath of the passion in your poetry. Loved this and felt it inside.

Alison

Gaelynsgirl
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since 2008-07-18

Posts 175
Ont. Canada

11 posted 2008-08-21 01:09 PM

Thank you so much Ali.
smiles n hugz
Lynda

Marchmadness
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since 2007-09-16

Posts 9271
So. El Monte, California

12 posted 2008-08-21 02:05 PM

A fine write, Lynda. Enjoyed.
Ida

Gaelynsgirl
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since 2008-07-18

Posts 175
Ont. Canada

13 posted 2008-08-21 02:11 PM

Thanks for the encouragement Ida. Love the learning process.

hugz
Lynda

OwlSA
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since 2005-11-07

Posts 9347
Durban, South Africa

14 posted 2008-08-21 02:19 PM

Well, Kin, that does it! Proof positive that we are related! I cannot imagine my life without passion. I had to look up "palabratic". Loved and really felt your poem!

- Owl

Gaelynsgirl
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since 2008-07-18

Posts 175
Ont. Canada

15 posted 2008-08-21 02:40 PM

And we haven't even discussed the fact that I used to raise horses! lol. I think we should look into our fathers' lineage! haha...
I saw the passion in your poetry long ago.
we are indeed 'Kin'!

OwlSA
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since 2005-11-07

Posts 9347
Durban, South Africa

16 posted 2008-08-22 02:21 PM

You raised horses? that REALLY does it! Yes, I agree, perhaps we should look up our fathers' liniage!

- Owl

LindsayP
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since 2007-07-28

Posts 3410
Australia, Victoria

17 posted 2008-08-22 10:35 PM

Speak to me of passion
When blood runs hot
Upon the pavement of desire
Free from cycling endlessly
In never-ending roadmaps
Of life.

That is a very passionate post my dear
Lynda, very much enjoyed.

Lindsay

Gaelynsgirl
Member

since 2008-07-18

Posts 175
Ont. Canada

18 posted 2008-08-22 10:41 PM

Lindsay... Thank you kind sir. I'm glad you enjoyed it.

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