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Def-init Member
since 2008-12-03
Posts 186Toronto, Canada |
From the day I joined this site. I have had the privilege to read some great poems and feedback from you all. A few of you have written poems that stick out in my mind. So I thought I would make a poem/rhyme for you. Well here goes. I'm tired of the way legislation is forged from miss-education. This is my ascension day, consider it a classical ballet. The exponential decay in the apex of the sun viewed through a crystal display, forever and ever plus a day. If you "SlowlyFallAway" I will slowly catch you. As if a net wrapped itself tightly around you. Making sure your safe hopefully appeals to you. I was born a person in the holy land. a sacrificial lamb with divine purpose. Told I would never have a chance, God's creation with an insatiable taste, blood or fine wine in my thermos. Creativity always on my mind. A falcon high in the sky. If you are "XxForever,BrokenxX" I will forever mend your mental and show you substance made of space's greatest materials. Show you a beautiful thing, warm air and a beautiful spring. The shoreline's red... from the atrocities of war, something feels rotten in the core. Love of god and common sense is all that saved me. I see beauty in God but I don't change. If you are a "Suncleaver" I will greet the fire's nature with you. The field of view is enormous Like the monstrous "Eye of Horus" watching the rage of jealous angels battling Satan’s wrath lifeless and all of man kind walking the pagan's path nameless. Something uncommon and unusual a singularity form of cancer I think I'm a midnight dreamer Either way, Cleaver, I feel yeah. I will join yeah as a blind man dreaming I fear the light, I write the dark Cause in all reality the universe started with a divine spark. - If I cant bend Heaven, I shall move Hell - |
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Suncleaver Member
since 2009-01-18
Posts 481Stafford England |
This is great stuff Def. Your rhymes always amaze me and you have a passion not stagnated by the conventional rules of poetry. Thanks for mentioning me by the way  In these lonely halls no moon will weep, no sun will shine. |
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pandabear Junior Member
since 2009-03-08
Posts 36 |
You are one of my fav poets this was really good -kara |
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Def-init Member
since 2008-12-03
Posts 186Toronto, Canada |
Anytime Cleaver  .Thx Panda. I am honored. - If I cant bend Heaven, I shall move Hell - |
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