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XOx Uriah xOX
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since 2006-02-11
Posts 1403
Virginia

0 posted 2012-01-27 11:31 AM




Search
for yourself

Search
by yourself

Search
yourself

No one else
can choose your path

nor walk it
in your place

They may stand beside,
or walk behind,

but the journey's
yours to face

No one else
can lead you

There are those
who point the way,

but no one can say
how far to go,

or where to
stop or stay

Hand-me-downs
can cover you,

but sometimes
do not fit

When force-fed meat
has gotten old,

don't be afraid
to spit

The center
of your being

is the place
where you
should start

Listen to
the guidance
given to
your heart

Take free flight,
you, who seeks

Ride each and every
wind that speaks

***

© Copyright 2012 Larry F. Leake - All Rights Reserved
ebonygirl
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since 2011-07-14
Posts 2000
California U.S.A
1 posted 2012-01-27 03:22 PM


"Take free flight you,
  who seeks..."
Enjoyed the wisdom in your poem.
Ms. E

Marchmadness
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since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271
So. El Monte, California
2 posted 2012-01-27 04:41 PM


So true, Larry. I especially like those last two lines.
                          Ida

tracie66
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since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713
Australia
3 posted 2012-01-28 12:10 PM


Very true write, glad to have read it.
- only you walk in your shoes and only you direct them.....

Love is the life of the soul...
It is the harmony of the universe
                        — W. E. Channing

katahdin
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since 2010-07-01
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ME. In the Shadow of the Mt.
4 posted 2012-01-28 05:47 AM


Nicely done!
Kat >^..^<

Nicole
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since 1999-06-23
Posts 1835
Florida
5 posted 2012-01-28 07:49 AM


I especially liked the title..."Whispers" with the poem; its the self that whispers, and you really have to listen to hear it above the cacophony that surrounds.
secondhanddreampoet
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since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394
a 'Universalist' !
6 posted 2012-01-29 10:36 AM


v. well said !

I am particularly fond of:

"The center
  of your being

  is the place
  where you
  should start"

AND of:

"Take free flight ...


  Ride each and every
  wind that speaks"

Margherita
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since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236
Eternity
7 posted 2012-01-30 09:22 AM


quote:
Listen to
the guidance
given to
your heart

Take free flight,
you, who seeks

Ride each and every
wind that speaks



Most beautifully expressed truthful advice.

Margherita

latearrival
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since 2003-03-21
Posts 5499
Florida
8 posted 2012-12-07 12:58 PM


As I do not read as often as I used to I missed this one. I Love it! To be yourself you first have to know yourself. thank you,
jo

Pilgrimage
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since 2001-12-04
Posts 3945
Texas, USA
9 posted 2012-12-07 09:32 PM


Oh, this one starts off soft and builds and builds.  Well done.

Nan (Pilgrim variety)

Michael
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-13
Posts 7666
California
10 posted 2012-12-08 12:46 PM


Glad to see this one brought back up.  Lots of little truths in it.  Much enjoyed.

Michael

2islander2
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since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825
by the sea
11 posted 2012-12-08 01:17 AM


splendid, a great message, indeed
and the endin verse, just amazing

yann

Victoria
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12 posted 2012-12-08 09:28 AM


Very inspiring write. Enjoyed your words.

~Victoria~

latearrival
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since 2003-03-21
Posts 5499
Florida
13 posted 2012-12-29 06:44 PM


It will soon be a year since this was written.I had to read it a once again  to remind me of the good advice. Thank you Larry, jo
Marchmadness
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since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271
So. El Monte, California
14 posted 2012-12-30 01:21 AM


Outstanding poem. Happy to read it again and send it back to the top.
                             Ida

ebonygirl
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since 2011-07-14
Posts 2000
California U.S.A
15 posted 2012-12-30 02:04 AM


A CLASSIC!
One to be read to bring on the New Year!
Enjoyed... again,
Ms. E

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