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Starfish
Junior Member
since 1999-07-20
Posts 34
New Zealand

0 posted 1999-07-22 01:26 AM


I tried to write a poem,
that might break out
of its shell for a while,

dazzle you with verbal
handstands and
slight of hand tricks,

I hoped it might
want to be written,
have it own hunger,

but today its like
its originator,
unable to reach you,

or reach myself,
as it dissolves
into a lifeless form.



[This message has been edited by Starfish (edited 07-22-99).]

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thursdayschild
Member
since 1999-07-01
Posts 169
Houston, Tx.
1 posted 1999-07-22 03:08 AM


see? you found inspiration to write a poem
in not being able to write a poem!
sometimes those words hide, and it's
irritating...but you created something good
out of it! Thanks for sharing.

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