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Do Geese See God? (Acrostic)
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Romy Senior Member
since 2000-05-28
Posts 1170Plantation, Florida |
Do geese view goD On every silver clOud as they Glide on soft winGs Ever closer to thE Edges of heavEn? Somehow it seemS Effortless to admirE Such a concept aS Exhilarative and dElightfully, Exquisite in naturE, Giving us all,the Grandest of opportunities tO Divulge in lovely Daydreams. |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Debbie~ This is a splendid accomplishment of the assignment. KUDOS ! ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Krawdad Member Elite
since 2001-01-03
Posts 2597 |
Debbie, I'M impressed! Dang, I've got to get busy! /:^)== =#== |
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Gene Senior Member
since 2000-01-23
Posts 935Colorado, USA |
Debbie, Excellent! ...and I thought you said you had writer's block. You chose a very difficult means by which to break the block and you succeeded beautifully. BTW, thanks for the welcome back. ~Gene |
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Romy Senior Member
since 2000-05-28
Posts 1170Plantation, Florida |
Marge, Thank-you, Writing this type of poem is kind of like creating a jigsaw puzzle isn't it? Krawdad, Thanks, I'm looking forward to reading your "Double Trouble" when it's finished! Gene, Thanks for the words of encouragement, this was really a challenge! [This message has been edited by Debbie (edited 01-11-2001).] |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Debbie, Very, well writtten in the words of Wilfred IWIWT (I wish I'd written this.) Lovely! Keth Those of us who refuse to risk and grow get swallowed up by life. Patty Hansen. |
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LoveBug
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Member Elite
since 2000-01-08
Posts 4697 |
You've painted some beautiful images with these words, my friend. This one deserves a wonderful grade!  "Where there is great love there are always miracles" -Cather "Love heals everything, and love is all there is"- Zukav |
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Romy Senior Member
since 2000-05-28
Posts 1170Plantation, Florida |
Kethry, Thanks, I'm usually the one who says, IWIWT! It's not to often that someone says that to me! I appreciate the encouragment! Lovebug, I'm glad that you liked it, now about that grade...How well do you know the teacher?... |
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Munda Member Elite
since 1999-10-08
Posts 3544The Hague, The Netherlands |
Debbie what a wonderful poem and I love the way how you cleverly turned it into a 201.  |
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Romy Senior Member
since 2000-05-28
Posts 1170Plantation, Florida |
Thanks Munda, Now what is missing to make this a genuine 501? Is it because it's not formatted? Or is it formatted? (I don't know) I sure hope the next lesson is easier than this one was! LOL! |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
Debbie - This is done beautifully - I do know that Geese touch the sky - so they MUST see God... Very nice theme, indeed... and don't count on the next assignment being easier - though I haven't a clue what it'll be yet..  |
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