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Rex
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since 2000-06-29
Posts 482
Houston, Texas

0 posted 2000-07-30 01:23 PM


What cruelty lies within your soul that you
should hope to gain
Immortal peace in some new life, attained
by other's pain!
Renouncing love that God has placed---ah!
not alone with you,
But tenderly and hopefully within the
hearts of two!
To sacrifice your heart may be a feat of
strength divine---
So may your gain be doubly high for having
broken mine!



© Copyright 2000 Rex E. Alford - All Rights Reserved
SpitFire
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since 2000-04-19
Posts 2396

1 posted 2000-07-30 01:29 PM


~Ooh Rex,...nice one! Truly masterful writing. Ouch though. Be well R. *Peace.
Ginners
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since 2000-07-22
Posts 339
Mullica Hill, New Jersey
2 posted 2000-07-30 05:15 PM


Good writing-sad thoughts

---gin

"There is no always forever-just this-R.Smith

broken glass never cuts the way it should-Gin


demoninlove
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since 2000-02-11
Posts 211
Dehradun
3 posted 2000-07-30 11:00 PM


Lovely Rex - And this stupid heart once broken is difficult to mend - and yet continues to love
Deepak


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