Dark Poetry #2 |
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Coming of Some |
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Xeonox![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2000-04-01
Posts 1764CA, USA ![]() |
Shining of moon, Passing away too soon, Memos of love, Stored high above, Coming of light, Wonder what appears is sight, Rising from their caves, Feared shadows have now become brave, Brace thyself for something new has formed, Like a newborn baby being borne. Ronil (What I say I live by and what I live by is what I create). |
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juliet_2u Senior Member
since 2000-07-23
Posts 1125North Carolina |
Xeonox, this was so very beautiful. Thanks for sharing it. Best wishes, Juls |
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juliet_2u Senior Member
since 2000-07-23
Posts 1125North Carolina |
Sorry but I had to come back for one more read.....Feared shadows have now become brave....that line really blew me away. Thanks again Xeonox, Juls |
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Jeremiah Johnson Senior Member
since 2000-06-08
Posts 1223Brooksville, Fl, U.S |
this is a great piece my friend. its nice to read work form all the great people i have met on here and i hope that you are planing to say here as well it would be a shame to lose a writer as great as you, cause you are one of my fav's. I'm a dying romantic and when i can no longer write i can no longer live -Jeremiah Johnson- |
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kynder Senior Member
since 2000-04-11
Posts 537Tallahassee, Florida |
oh yes nox!! this is so very very good. i echo juliet2u thoughts.. feared shadows become brave.. wow. thank you!! loved it!! kynder Sunshine can not bleach The snow, Nor time unmake what Poets know. Ralph Waldo Emerson |
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