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Jennifer (everyone read) |
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Neokrew Member
since 2000-12-24
Posts 60VA |
This is a really crapy poem I am writting off my head in 2 sec I really want to talk about something different. But anyways here: With every smile With every laugh You and only you make my life All worth wile --Neo Now to the important stuff. I want to take this time to thank one of my very best friends who had a rough day today so here goes. Thank you Jennifer for being my friend and for being you. I don't know if you know this but *holding back the tears* you have made a huge no massive impact on my life. I mean you got me onto netpoets and keep me inline you know keeps me from getting 2 big of a had  and your just you. Thanks for all you have done and I will talk to you later oh and by the way your last poem was really good. |
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LoveBug
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Member Elite
since 2000-01-08
Posts 4697 |
This is a beautiful tribute to your friend. It may be short, but it says a lot. I'm sure that Jennifer will be honored to know she has a friend like you. Thanks for sharing.  "Men judge generally more by the eye than by the hand, for everyone can see and few can feel."-Machiavelli |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
Nicely done here and a wonderful tribute!  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. I'm in love with my shadow I admire it daily |
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Marshalzu
since 2001-02-15
Posts 2681Lurking |
A great tribute, and the quantity does not matter it is the meaning behind the poem that makes it special... Marshal Zu. |
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Ski*Chick Member
since 2001-01-13
Posts 141Fitchburg, Mass, Usa |
Hello- I like your poem. Just like love bug said it's short, but shows alot of feelings about your friend.  Minna You can hide, You can be crul, You can't be my friend. |
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Tears of Glass Member
since 2000-12-04
Posts 182Physically? VA.... Mentally? I'm not quite sure |
Aww... Jermaine, thank you so much. It's friends like you that make my life all worth the while. You don't know what our friendship means to me... You make me laugh, and smile whenever I'm around you. How could I possible ask for more? This poem almost made me cry. You have stuck by me in the past weeks even though everything has been far less than perfect. You mean so much to me, babe! Thanks so much.. This meant a whole lot. Love always, Jen "My nightmare isn't fearing what I dream... It's waking up, knowing what I'll see." |
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Acies
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
I'm glad to see that the both of you do appreciate what you both mean to each other. beautiful poem neokrew "So long as men can breathe or eyes can see, So long lives this, and this give life to thee." W.S. |
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Allan Riverwood
since 2001-01-04
Posts 3502Winnipeg |
Cute tribute. Senryu/Haiku is a nice way to make short poetry, you should try it sometime. See you around. ~Allan Stupidity makes the world go around...and people like us laugh. ~~Elizabeth, to Allan |
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Isabel Galaxia Senior Member
since 2000-06-18
Posts 733 |
Very sweet, good job  Bel |
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Neokrew Member
since 2000-12-24
Posts 60VA |
Hey guys, Awww your going to make me cry with all these nice replies :) --Neo |
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Acies
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
It was a great poem neo though it was short you deserve all the great replies "So long as men can breathe or eyes can see, So long lives this, and this give life to thee." W.S. |
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