Open Poetry #16 |
Unknown Evils (a Halloween poem) |
rosepetals25
since 2000-05-31
Posts 3076PA |
Unknown Evils You run. Feeling the icy firm grip Of grabbing fingers. Reaching for you being. You hear the whispers Of an unknown evil Speaking to your soul. Your body shudders Feeling the chilling breath Dance across your neck You eyes wildly search In the growing blackness Knowing not where you roam Your mind screams As the unseen shadows Grow closer… suffocating Your soul begs silently Slipping away… no control Feeling their invasion You feel your spirit flee Bone chilling cold replacing The departing warmth Your ears hearing Their gleeful evil cackles As they move on Searching for the innocent To greedily consume This halloween night HAPPY HALLOWEEN [This message has been edited by rosepetals25 (edited 10-29-2001).] |
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Greeneyes
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
Neat little write here.....I enjoyed this.... Greeneyes~ ***** I keep my ideals, because in spite of everything, I still believe that people are really good at heart. Anne Frank 09*12*01 [This message has been edited by Greeneyes (edited 10-29-2001).] |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
*giggling* Oh gosh this is a wonderful poem and so perfect for Halloween. I love it. Watch out for thoses things that go bump in the nights. Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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RosePetal
since 2001-08-26
Posts 2985South Florida |
I enjoyed this Tara, Have a spooky but safe halloween! [This message has been edited by RosePetal (edited 10-29-2001).] |
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rosepetals25
since 2000-05-31
Posts 3076PA |
Greeneyes - Thank you I'm happy you liked. Startime - You have to watch those night time shadows Have a good Halloween Rosepetal - I'm glad you liked it You have a safe one as well Don't marry for money... You can borrow it cheaper! |
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Auguste
since 2000-02-16
Posts 3953By the sea |
Sounds like somebody I know still sleeps with the light on. LOL This is cute! Loved it, Tara. Michael Michael Auguste~ |
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