Open Poetry #16 |
For Regina . . . challenge response #16 . . . Sweet Tennesse gal |
Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
If this offends any reader, please have the courtesy to POST YOUR COMMENT and send me an Email. I AM capable of editing almost anything. sweet Tennessee gal mountain born an’ bred she is with thirteen brothers ~*~ we met at the falls that feed the old fishin’ hole down in the holler ~*~ split rail fences thar to set on an’ talk and dream ‘til the brothers come ~*~ very protective very many an’ big, too we must avoid them ~*~ we found this nice place at the end of the holler whar the bluegrass grows ~*~ I stole me a kiss one thing led to another an’ we were kissin’ ~*~ we were explorin’ air breath comin’ in short gasps between air kisses ~*~ air hands so busy we were lost in each other here came her brothers ~*~ well, she got buttoned so did I as fast as fire an’ lit outta thar Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. |
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The Lady of Shallot Senior Member
since 2001-10-03
Posts 818USA |
didn't offend me, makes you seem all the more taller with every post! -befriend yourself and you will never be alone- |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Absolutely loved this!! Regina will love it too. *s* On the wings of words our spirits fly....and our souls are free. |
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
niiiiiiiiiiice....I like,I like |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Lady of Shallot~ Gosh. D'ya think I could get taller? I am the runt of the family at only 6'4" Gentle Spirit ~ Thank you ... and I hope she does SEA ~ Thaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaannnx Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. [This message has been edited by Interloper (edited 11-02-2001).] |
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SmittenKitten Senior Member
since 2001-06-20
Posts 1131where the sky and horizon meet |
hehehe a giggle and a half for this one! Was Larry in with the pack of brothers? We need a third party to tell us the truth! Hugs, ~Krista |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Interloper...this was very very tame...lol. Enjoyed this one as I have the others tall dude! Carry on..... ~Time has cast a spell on you, |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
LOL *giggling* Oh gosh....I just can't seem to get enough of these..."Feet do you duty, your body's in danger" a favorite saying of my father and here it fits perfectly. Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
Oh no! You sure do have alot of bad luck. |
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Decaflame Senior Member
since 2001-05-11
Posts 1635 |
Is your luck all bad? These are too clever! |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Krista ~ I think Larry told on us. I'll fix his wagon! enchantress ~ OK, I can live with tame Startime ~ Your daddy was a wise man SmartChick ~ If it weren't for bad luck I'd have no luck at all Deca ~ Well, if I'm so clever how come I don't get to finish. Heck, I really don't even get started good. I could blame lunatic and Sunshine for the blue moon. Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. [This message has been edited by Interloper (edited 11-02-2001).] |
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rwood Member Elite
since 2000-02-29
Posts 3793Tennessee |
Whoowwweeee!!! I reckon I got news for you...I been waitin on this muddy bank for 2 years for you to come round...Now I got me a Man!!!! Brother or no brother...I can whip em' and I have legs as long as two counties and you ain't goin no where!...But I'll play along...for the fun of it! Been practicin' on my mud wrestlin' technique...I bet you won't get far! Big Smooch for you!!! Love it! Oh Feller O'Mine! Sincerely, Regina |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
LOL, this is making my day...once again. Regina ain't gonna let no durn bros stop her, oh no. |
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walker Member Elite
since 2001-02-11
Posts 2240Florida |
I think that by now you have a price tag, 13 brothers. What's next jealous boyfriend?? Too funny. |
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