Open Poetry #27 |
For no one |
gemjop Member Elite
since 2002-11-18
Posts 2587Pencilveinia, USA |
Fetch me the dead skin shovel crawl over my pale and back again blow shallow cold over my hairs on end rise with renewed wealth in quiet like a blush of embarrassment I stupidly let you in. |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
I stupidly let you in. Ah we can always count on ourselves to %&$^ things up again and again |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
cool |
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-06-15
Posts 7136Mobile, AL |
Yep.. You could hurt me with your bare hands. You could hurt me using the sharp edge of what you say. JEWEL |
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Wind
since 2002-10-12
Posts 2981 |
Gem, what did I tell you? lol. your poem was great- and it looks live a shovel. Hehe- to bury all the people you kill with your words. ~`The shivering peanut`~ If art is still inside, I feel it -Aaron Lewes [This message has been edited by Wind (07-13-2003 01:54 PM).] |
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Ericc Member Elite
since 2003-01-31
Posts 4178 |
So much depth...great writing. Eric |
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Kaoru
since 2003-06-07
Posts 3892where the wild flowers grow |
Beautiful writing, as always..love the style and the flow of words.. |
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