Open Poetry #31 |
Red |
Kicking Kim Member
since 2001-04-16
Posts 426Cloud Cucko Land! |
Her crimson dress wanders where the crispy Autumn leaves may go. She follows gently painting the town red. Her lips abloom with rose complexion her hair gently decorated with copper overtones. And yet she spells out danger. |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Love the colors and the message. A dangerous cover up........I'll keep on the watch for her. I enjoyed the read. Eric Ain't doin nothin at all |
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zippi Member
since 2004-03-31
Posts 56California |
Caution, the lady in red is about! What a fun poem! Rene` |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Kim, Good write, enjoyed the read. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
wonderfully done! Love the format and the theme...excellent! |
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choshi Senior Member
since 2004-01-01
Posts 1184New York |
Vivid! I see her right behind me...better watch out... ~P |
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Grover Senior Member
since 2004-01-27
Posts 1967London, ON, Canada |
Wow! Excellent! |
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