Dark Poetry #1 |
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Ember Junior Member
since 2000-06-06
Posts 10 |
And if i die before i wake Know that all of this felt so fake The way i lived The lack of love Watch it all wither away, ive had all i can take Bleed me sour Beat me sensless i will never conform, i just devour Ignorance sided with freedom is priceless The wiser i grow, i loose my power The power to cope and communicate Patience for patience to come The ability to relate An endless well running dry, i go numb My own pleasure i begin to negate Standing next to forever Crying tears that strike earth all to late [This message has been edited by Ember (edited 06-08-2000).] |
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Novacaine For The Soul Member
since 2000-05-26
Posts 122New Orleans |
dear ember: i must admit, i was quite impressed by this poem also quite glad to see someone use the cliche "if i die before i wake" in a new and innovative way... i also have to give you credit for an interesting and quite unique title... i'm afraid it's a bit late tonight, but i shall be sure to keep an eye out for your other posts on my next visit to the forums... sincerely, a sad tomato |
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
your poem is beautiful...i love it i'd like you to explain the 2nd stanza to me though...i'm having a hard time understanding it |
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