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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines 
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my heart isn't in it when it use to be for the love of it a journey whose silent cries reached for comfort I no longer find instead challenge after challenge emotionless responses the thrill seeming to fade along with the tenderness wanting to silence this voice inside the one that speaks out of turn always twisting the climb making it more hazardess, cliff hangers edged in suspense those unknown feelings painting my thoughts wondering if I will ever hear those three words again carrying fear, wearing it too tightly the lacings nearly squeezing the life out of me at times just because I am who I am and I feel how I feel and the uncertainty obscures my view. M "Love is not blind - It sees more and not less, but because it sees more, it is willing to see less." |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
"carrying fear, wearing it too tightly the lacings nearly squeezing the life out of me at times" ~ it is lines like these that keep me coming back to read the offerings from your poetic pen!  Warm hugs, Linda  |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
"carrying fear, wearing it too tightly the lacings nearly squeezing the life out of me at times just because I am who I am and I feel how I feel and the uncertainty obscures my view." M girl, you sure can pen'em! |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
sounds like what I feel about life these days |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
well captured the mood of wonder about those words, the sadness and the suspense |
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Professor Gloom Member Elite
since 2000-07-23
Posts 3082of Depression |
T’is a challenge when you roll the dice Spin the wheel or walk on thin ice, Who wait around the next corner there A bed of roses or a thorny scare, But what if never a challenge take How else would the monotony break So pick up those dice and throw agin You’ll never know if you never spin Gloom |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
walking on egg shells can really cut the feet hugs lady...your pen is certainly wise and significant in all you feel...what an incredible write....also enjoyed the Professors write as welll...many thanks for sharing and have a nice weekend |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Earth Angel, sometimes I don't know where the "lines" come from ...thank you for reading me hugging back, iliana, just my moodiness  passing shadows, guess we could trade lives, huh? Only I don't want all that rain. inkedgoddess, suspense gets to me sometimes...leaving me sad Professor Gloom, well I will roll the dice several times more but I never liked to walk on thin ice or take the kind of challenges that can leave me crippled in one way or another. And I am still looking for that bed of roses~ Thank you for the scheme of words. LeeJ, I am not a fan of walking on eggshells. Thank you Lee for your kind words  M |
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