Seymour Tabin
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since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla
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2005-06-26
07:38 AM
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It Slips and Slides
Slipping, sliding, in my brain Seeping through my mind, like rain Dust of thoughts that glow and spark Light a theater in the dark
Phantoms play in amber glow Spirits speak in somber woe Shadows action flicker quick Sound and filigree too thick
Motion rides a charging horse In and out a changing course Blazing through the mist of time Raising powders dust and grime
And I in rage and fires awe Try to pierce the shell of core Head long into the abyss Form into a chrysalis
And when I wake I shed a tear So far away and yet so near
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SimplyGold
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2005-06-26
10:22 AM
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Yes Seymour,
I have been there. The space between the dream and wakefullness. The tears are real though. Nice write...
Sg
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SEA
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since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676
with you
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2005-06-26
11:00 AM
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oh yes...been there...loved this!
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Marge Tindal
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since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores
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2005-06-26
12:38 PM
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Seymour~
Oh my ... Lord knows that I know this one~
'And when I wake I shed a tear So far away and yet so near'
*Huglets* ~*Marge*~
~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, the spirit rejoices over what it has left. - Sufi epigram <))><
Email noles1@totcon.com
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scorpio
Member Ascendant
since 2002-10-02
Posts 5178
right...there
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2005-06-26
01:16 PM
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The mystery of dreams Sy. Reality or fantasy? Well done.believe in what your heart feels...
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Seymour Tabin
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Tamarac Fla
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2005-06-26
01:36 PM
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SimplyGold Thank you sweety
SEA Thank you for the like.
Marge Thanks for the read love.
scorpio Thank you for the well done.
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Earth Angel
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since 2002-08-27
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Realms of Light
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2005-06-26
01:47 PM
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Good morning, Sir Sonneteering Dreamer!
Many's a time, I have awakened from a dream of bliss and tried to recapture it. But, alas, they were illusive...
Another fine write, m'friend!
~ May your pleasant dreams be a reflection of your reality!
Loving hugs,
EA
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passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26
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displaced
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2005-06-26
01:47 PM
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was just there not long ago
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Ericc
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2005-06-26
01:57 PM
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Beautiful flow and powerfuly expressed...great job!
Eric
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Seymour Tabin
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Tamarac Fla
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2005-06-26
03:32 PM
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Earth Angel
passing Thank you sweety
Ericc Thank you for the re4ad and comment.
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iliana
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USA
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2005-06-27
12:14 PM
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"And I in rage and fires awe Try to pierce the shell of core Head long into the abyss Form into a chrysalis"
Ah.....yes, but then (and of course, hehehe, you already know this) Sy, the chrysalis eventually does turn into a butterfly....you make me smile! The incubation periods are a necessary part of the process....yes? ......jo[This message has been edited by iliana (06-27-2005 12:57 AM).]
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Seymour Tabin
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Tamarac Fla
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2005-06-27
06:50 AM
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iliana Yes, thank you.
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ethome
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New Brunswick Canada
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2005-06-29
04:50 AM
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Just so clever Sy so durn clever....Well done my friend!
Eric
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Beki
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since 1999-09-15
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2005-06-29
05:02 AM
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enjoyed this very much
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nakdthoughts
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Between the Lines
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2005-06-29
06:54 AM
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And when I wake I shed a tear So far away and yet so near
everyday...this seems to happen
but not for long, I hope
hugs M
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Seymour Tabin
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Tamarac Fla
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2005-06-29
07:53 AM
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ethome Long time no see, thank you my friend.
Beki Thank you for the enjoy.
Maureen, Thank you sweet and nothing is forever.
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