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Alicat
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since 1999-05-23
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0 posted 1999-08-18 11:07 AM

Well, I took the time to read your four-part epic, and was impressed...by the length.
The story was very interesting with a subtle twist in the epilogue.

I have an idea for you, if you have not already considered such. How about doing some line-length editing and turning this project into a monologue or one-act.

Just a thought.

Alicat
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