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Teen Poetry #1

Alone

Cosey
Junior Member

since 1999-06-21

Posts 14
To., Ont, Can.

0 posted 1999-09-30 11:49 PM

I sit alone
my room feels dead
and the rain keeps pouring in my head
don't know what to do
cos i can't feel..what isn't right and isn't
real
i watch the others
like in a show
in front of my eyes
they come and go
but they don't see me
As i'm alone
It's only me...
I'm on my own..

ESP
Member Elite

since 2000-01-25

Posts 2556
Floating gently on a cloud....

1 posted 2000-01-28 05:18 AM

Pretty poem. It describes being alone very well. Keep up the writing

Artic Wind
Member Rara Avis

since 2007-09-16

Posts 8080
Realm of Supernatural

2 posted 2007-11-13 07:47 PM

Enjoyed

ARCTIC WIND

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