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Teen Poetry #1

All I Ever Wanted

Joshua
Junior Member

since 1999-07-08

Posts 43
phoenix,az,usa

0 posted 1999-07-10 02:53 AM

All i ever wanted is in you:
Love, laughter, a pillow for my fears.
I want to give and be given to
So i might feel myself flow through the years
Alive in you, the wonder of my tears.

Kelly
Member

since 1999-07-03

Posts 145

1 posted 1999-07-11 01:18 PM

Thank you Joshua. I felt this one very deeply. Excellent job.

Joshua
Junior Member

since 1999-07-08

Posts 43
phoenix,az,usa

2 posted 1999-07-12 02:02 PM

Thank you, and you're welcome

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"Poetry is an orphan of silence. The words never quite equal the experiece behind them." *Charles Simic*

"The poet is the priest of the invisable." *Wallace Stevens*
"I don't write poetry for me or about my experiences, I rely on others for that. I write poetry for others." *Me*

[This message has been edited by Joshua (edited 07-12-99).]

poetFemmeFatale
Member Elite

since 1999-07-25

Posts 2646
Arkansas

3 posted 1999-08-11 01:24 PM

Very nice piece Josh...so much said in so few words...

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- poet FemmeFatale

"The strongest man in the world is he who stands most alone..." Henrik Ibsen (1826-1906) Norwegian dramatist lyric poet

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