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mistah v-dog
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since 1999-07-08
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falmouth, massachussetts,U.S.
0 posted 1999-07-13 09:07 AM




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habeebpetersen@hotmail
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since 1999-07-07
Posts 28
falmouth MA usa
1 posted 1999-07-13 09:09 AM

i liked your poem because it had alot of words and good symetry
brockglaze
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since 1999-07-13
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Muncie,Indiana,USA
2 posted 1999-07-13 09:44 AM

i also thought this poem was well written, its sad, but it gets right to the point. good work! and your right hippos are grey...
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