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Teen Poetry #1

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lowradiation32
New Member

since 1999-07-07

Posts 6
Cape Cod Mass

0 posted 1999-07-14 09:16 AM

to live
to breathe
to have love in my life
simple goals
difficult strife

to be happy
to be not alone
to be held by friends
to have a home

simple things i want
difficult sometimes to see
but with hope on my side
i may be complete

[This message has been edited by Nan (edited 07-14-99).]

tiffany
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since 1999-07-06

Posts 8
falmouth, massachusetts,united states

1 posted 1999-07-14 10:50 AM

I really liked your poem. It reminds me of all of the stuff I'm going thru and it explains how I feel exactly.

-TIFFANY-

Nan

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Member Seraphic

since 1999-05-20

Posts 21191
Cape Cod Massachusetts USA

2 posted 1999-07-14 10:53 AM

This one is really good, lowradiation - It doesn't quite match your sonnet - but you'll have to go a long way to do that...

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