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Teen Poetry #1

Dance of the Stars

Venus
Junior Member

since 1999-07-25

Posts 12
Oklahoma, USA

0 posted 1999-07-25 05:43 PM

Gliding ever so gracefully,
Without missing a step.
They dance through the night sky.
Hiding deep secrets.

Since the dawn or time,
When God taught them there dance,
The Stars have not missed a step.
Dazzled by there grace, we try to copy Their dance.

What secrets do the stars hide?
I do not know.
I only know that if the Stars can dance ,
Since the dawn of time,

I shall continue my dance of life.

Acid Angel
Junior Member

since 1999-07-25

Posts 17
Austin, TX, US

1 posted 1999-07-25 07:24 PM

I love your poem!! Its so beautiful, your use of the words was perfect.

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