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Teen Poetry #1

A troubled love

ConderE
Junior Member

since 1999-08-14

Posts 29
TX, USA

0 posted 1999-08-14 01:26 AM

I liked you a lot,
Because you were hot.
I thought you were great,
And I wanted a date.
You brought to my life,
A world without strife.
But everything went wrong,
Will we stay friends for long?

ConderE
Junior Member

since 1999-08-14

Posts 29
TX, USA

1 posted 1999-08-15 12:21 PM

If u read this, please post a reply.

Tanya
Junior Member

since 1999-07-26

Posts 43
Brooklyn, NY, USA

2 posted 1999-08-15 01:33 AM

I think your poem is cute.

ConderE
Junior Member

since 1999-08-14

Posts 29
TX, USA

3 posted 1999-08-17 08:26 PM

thanx.

Nici
Junior Member

since 1999-08-16

Posts 22
Hastings, New Zealand

4 posted 1999-08-17 11:41 PM

I agree with Tanya!
"Short and very sweet!"

Good stuff!

ConderE
Junior Member

since 1999-08-14

Posts 29
TX, USA

5 posted 1999-08-18 06:46 PM

Thanx

Devin
Junior Member

since 1999-08-23

Posts 29
Oviedo,Fl, USA

6 posted 1999-08-26 08:53 PM

I liked it. Short and sweet works for me!! (NO pun intended.)

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Never lose hope, even the darkest nights have ends.

ConderE
Junior Member

since 1999-08-14

Posts 29
TX, USA

7 posted 1999-08-29 05:41 PM

Thanx

Aprender
Junior Member

since 1999-06-22

Posts 40
Rohill, NJ, USA

8 posted 1999-08-29 08:06 PM

nice lil poem..as every1 else said...cute

ConderE
Junior Member

since 1999-08-14

Posts 29
TX, USA

9 posted 1999-08-29 08:11 PM

Thanx

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