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Teen Poetry #1

Forgive me Love...

Master
Senior Member

since 1999-08-18

Posts 1867
Boston, MA

0 posted 1999-08-18 02:04 AM

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Forgive me Love for this disgrace
The love I feel is just unheard of
The way I love makes lovers sort of
Appear as lacking love and taste

With love I ask for your forgiveness
For being pure, forgive me fully
Forgive me Love for loving truly
Forgive me Love my love’s uniqueness
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HEy I'm new here, 16 male from Bronx, NY

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I fell in love and kept on falling

[This message has been edited by Master (edited 08-18-99).]

Former DeadPoet
Junior Member

since 1999-08-01

Posts 16

1 posted 1999-08-18 05:26 PM

Welcome! Im pretty new myself. Sixteen from Brooklyn (male). Great poem.

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Have a nice day and smile! =)

Master
Senior Member

since 1999-08-18

Posts 1867
Boston, MA

2 posted 1999-08-18 07:28 PM

HEy thanks for your comments on both of my poems! I'm glad you liked it. I've read your "definition of true love," I've got to I agree with you absolutely. I too have loved and suffered and I know the meaning of love. Thanks again.

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I fell in love and kept on falling

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