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Teen Poetry #1

Happiness

Raspberme
Junior Member

since 1999-09-04

Posts 21
South Hill, WA, USA

0 posted 1999-09-04 07:17 PM

Happiness is the color of the sun rising;
It sounds like never ending laughter
And tasting fresh.
Happiness smells like a new CD, opened for the first time;
It lookd like the never ending sea
And feeling like the world is yours.

Happiness is the color of the clouds seperating,
Sounds like peace in the world.
It tastes like a juicy apple
And smells like a freshly cute orange.
Happiness looks like a child opening a gift.
It makes me feel loved.

Happiness is yellow with an open mind;
It sounds like young girls gleemins with joy
Tates like chocolate covered strawberries.
Happiness smells like your favorite hair shampoo;
Looking like a million smiles
And it feels like jumping into a pool on a hot summer day.

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Raspberme

beowulf_26
Member

since 1999-06-29

Posts 183

1 posted 1999-09-09 07:48 PM

It really brought a smile to my face

I definitly liked how you mixed the really vast images with common things like a new CD.

Great job. Hopefully, you'll get some more responses. YOu deserve them.

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