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Teen Poetry #1

What one can do.

beowulf_26
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since 1999-06-29

Posts 183

0 posted 1999-09-09 07:40 PM

I run through the feilds.
Naked.
No exterior host or inhibitions.
My soul exposed.
I marvel at the world.
Looking through rose glasses it refreshing.
An innocence lost, I have found.
A delight in being vulnerable.
Not a delight the sadistic get from the fear of losing.
But the ecstacy of knowing you won't let go.
That I'm safe with you.

Thank you for releasing me.

Alwye

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since 1999-06-16

Posts 3850
In the space between moments

1 posted 1999-09-11 01:40 AM

Wow, beautiful and powerful. I enjoyed your word usage immensly. Keep it up!

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*Krista Knutson*

Mockery is a form of ignorance; silence, a form of wisdom. -- Daniel L. Miller

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