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Huan Yi Member Ascendant
since 2004-10-12
Posts 6688Waukegan 
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. With me Let no words Be said Prattle on As much as you want With anyone else Yet with me Let there be Nothing heard For I am moved By a doe in the woods Whose graceful passing Gives me pause Be there quietly As if a spirit Whose coming Into my life Is like a moment Knowing God . |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
wow... and wow again!!  |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Huan Yi - nicely written... BC |
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secondhanddreampoet Member Ascendant
since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394a 'Universalist' ! |
especially fine ending!: "... I am moved By a doe in the woods Whose graceful passing Gives me pause Be there quietly As if a spirit Whose coming Into my life Is like a moment Knowing God" applause !! |
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