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With Me(for want of a better title) |
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pen&paper Senior Member
since 2006-06-06
Posts 513
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Sing broken lyrics To this broken heart I'm not healed yet But it's a start And I don't know what I'm doing But I guess I'll figure it out Can we figure it out together And at once mend two broken hearts? Cause when I have you with me The pain it's more intense But it's a pain I like A Pain I Need Come take a while Watch the sunset And find life's real meaning With Me |
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BrittanyJ Member
since 2007-06-03
Posts 461Come find me? |
I really liked it pen!! This was my favorite line tho: "I'm not healed yet But it's a start" Beautiful  Bravo, and i can't wait for your next one!So no more hiding all your pain, you deserve a new start. That's why i'm closing myself away, this is a message from your heart. |
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hunnie_girl
since 2006-06-18
Posts 2567Canada |
this was so sweet I lved it. hunnie. ~fool me once shame on you, fool me twice shame on me~ |
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