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Teen Poetry #8
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Clockwork_Orange
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since 2007-03-23
Posts 620
Space Camp, IN
0 posted 2007-08-09 09:55 PM

your heart
is one beat
and your eyes
can not see
its playing out
right in front of me
what should i do

make it come
make it seep
make it love
and make it sleep
just stop the tragedy
from falling through on me
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BrittanyJ
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since 2007-06-03
Posts 461
Come find me?
1 posted 2007-08-09 10:09 PM

"just stop the tragedy
from falling through on me"

This is my favorite line...but i liked the whole thing!! Every time you write something you blow me away Amazing.

So no more hiding all your pain, you deserve a new start. That's why i'm closing myself away, this is a message from your heart.
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