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Teen Poetry #8

Tempting lips

jayjara
Member

since 2007-05-02

Posts 90
Florida

0 posted 2007-12-11 11:27 PM

I sample a fantastic kiss
only to clean the bitter taste
left after uttering love.
I am subject to my mistress
after false assumptions
of a dirty love. How sweet is
she who morphs my lips to
echo a tasteless flirt.
I drown myself in tulip-shaped
lips at their brim with love;
the very same that forced the
blade through my chest,
puncturing that from where love
bleeds from.
I resurface only to skepticize;
no longer love but compromise.

-J

*CaT*
Junior Member

since 2007-12-07

Posts 46
Oxford, England

1 posted 2007-12-12 02:47 PM

gr8 poem, the enjambament really emphasises your chosen words.love the line:

How sweet is
she who morphs my lips to
echo a tasteless flirt.

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