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Teen Poetry #8
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Elias Nevermore
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since 2007-11-03
Posts 152
0 posted 2007-12-12 07:30 PM


I turn my head away from the sight
of that tombstone in the graveyard
which I carved with the tears i shed
and forged in the embers of my sins
For that tombstone is a result
of my mistakes and my misconceptions
which led to the fall of one who
paid for my toll, and now lays
in the stillness, where I belong.
© Copyright 2007 Author Andrew E.L. - All Rights Reserved
jayjara
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since 2007-05-02
Posts 90
Florida
1 posted 2007-12-12 07:38 PM

excellent..dat is poetry..very strong emotion and a nice flow..love the tears on da tombstone

kool

-J
wolf girl
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since 2007-12-03
Posts 150
washington, US
2 posted 2007-12-12 10:49 PM

i know how you feel. i have done the same thing.
RenaissanceRomanceRunsRed
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since 2007-06-11
Posts 1062
In Love <3
3 posted 2007-12-13 07:35 AM

umm it's funny, it seems as if everyone is now confessing their sins.


"I have no other but a woman's reason:
I think him so, because I think him so."
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