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Teen Poetry #8

just a little poem

Katarina
Junior Member

since 2008-03-10

Posts 15
AUSTRALIA, N.S.W

0 posted 2008-03-10 03:54 AM

some days when im lonely
i dunno what anymore
somethimes i get monely
but soon i know it will get better

cause times i look in the mirror
and wonder what im doing right now
wondering, just wonding how

i know that my life might get better
but theres only one cure...

and thats if im with you
i know
its a big ask, of you
but you that i love you

Falling rain

Member Elite

since 2008-01-31

Posts 2178
Small town, Illinois

1 posted 2008-03-10 08:33 AM

umm i think the way you were ryhmeing in this is sort of off. double check it. but besides that great poem!!

~Zach~

~*With the wind and my heart at my side. I'll live the life i want*~

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