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Teen Poetry #8

when will it dye

hiddensmiles
Senior Member

since 2008-02-07

Posts 514
at the beach... i wish

0 posted 2008-03-14 05:05 PM

lies you build up
trust you crash down
how long do i wait
before our friendship
dies to the ground

time has gone by
but nothing seams to
change

you blame me
but i know the truth

you tell me
that i am two faced
but really
you are writing
your autobiography

i'm tired of being the
only one trying

the time is ticking bye
when will it dye...

[This message has been edited by hiddensmiles (03-14-2008 07:19 PM).]

hiddensmiles
Senior Member

since 2008-02-07

Posts 514
at the beach... i wish

1 posted 2008-03-15 05:27 PM

this poem is about a confused friendship

starpower
Member

since 2007-04-10

Posts 82
Utah

2 posted 2008-03-15 07:33 PM

Hey Hiddensmiles,
That was a great poem and firendship should last for ever

You can send me an email,
Thanks

hiddensmiles
Senior Member

since 2008-02-07

Posts 514
at the beach... i wish

3 posted 2008-04-10 08:37 PM

it is a great thing.

[This message has been edited by hiddensmiles (04-10-2008 11:34 PM).]

hiddensmiles
Senior Member

since 2008-02-07

Posts 514
at the beach... i wish

4 posted 2008-04-11 12:17 PM

this poem is an old one

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