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Teen Poetry #8

This Thing

idntcareifudntcare
Junior Member

since 2006-10-18

Posts 18
BC, Canada

0 posted 2006-10-18 01:34 AM

This Thing
by: me...

Theres this thing.
It's about him.
who?
Well thats the thing.

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xxx

rhia_5779
Senior Member

since 2006-06-09

Posts 1334
California

1 posted 2006-10-18 09:34 AM

What? there is not enough here to judge it. There is no body to it. It needs more. I also didnt get it

idntcareifudntcare
Junior Member

since 2006-10-18

Posts 18
BC, Canada

2 posted 2006-10-19 05:17 PM

Lol.. sori.. ITs this guy I like and umm I dont really know him.. hehehe.. i guess its not very clear eh.. sorry...

xxx

hunnie_girl

Member Elite

since 2006-06-18

Posts 2567
Canada

3 posted 2006-10-19 11:16 PM

yes, it was short; a little too much to know much about the piece. I think this could be made into something more if you added to poem, shared more ideas, feelings...
hunnie*

A time to love, and a time to hate; a time of war and a time for peace ~Ecclesiastes 3:8~

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