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Teen Poetry #8

Bride and Groom

PoetrySinger
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since 2006-10-16

Posts 54

0 posted 2006-10-18 01:21 PM

The Bride and groom go
hand in hand
it takes one woman
then a man
to start a life what
a beautiful thing

PoetrySinger
Member

since 2006-10-16

Posts 54

1 posted 2006-10-18 01:30 PM

This lets me no that marriage is beautiful, but if it never happens for me look at what I have not what I want

patience_iago
Member

since 2006-08-30

Posts 54

2 posted 2006-10-18 07:21 PM

i like this, but i wanted more yanno?

"There are some days where i believe i might die of an overdose of satisfaction"
-Dali

hunnie_girl

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since 2006-06-18

Posts 2567
Canada

3 posted 2006-10-21 11:30 PM

short and sweet. ~nice~
hunnie*

A time to love, and a time to hate; a time of war and a time for peace ~Ecclesiastes 3:8~

tearsoflove13762
Member

since 2004-09-05

Posts 488
Texas.. and yes i have an accent

4 posted 2006-10-22 02:47 AM

i understand the shortness in poems everyone has their preferences tho good write could be longer but it works

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