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Assassin_of_Verse
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since 2007-10-23
Posts 330
that So Cal
0 posted 2008-03-27 06:05 PM


Lingering Thoughts

It howls and shrieks,
through snarling teeth,
racing through my sight.
A touch of green,
a wreath of red,
a urge veiled by night.

Ambivalence,
could not describe
the twisted thoughts I feel.
Nor does dissonance,
disturb the wounds
that fought so hard to heal.

My raging heart
cannot be held
by the standards I proclaim.

[This message has been edited by Assassin_of_Verse (03-27-2008 07:19 PM).]
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masksrlife
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since 2008-03-26
Posts 109
Canada
1 posted 2008-03-27 07:04 PM

I love this poem it expains so much in so little lines! It flows so great to. I just love it not really anything else tosay.

          *desaster*
hiddensmiles
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since 2008-02-07
Posts 514
at the beach... i wish
2 posted 2008-03-27 11:56 PM

Nice write!!
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