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Teen Poetry #8

Goodbye, I can't Win

XxForever.BrokenxX
Senior Member

since 2008-01-20

Posts 891
Neverland

0 posted 2008-04-15 05:26 PM

{~HEY LOOK!! A somewhat ryhming poem!

No longer good enough
for what I knew, no
longer existing for only
you. I live for myself
alone and hollow inside.
I wont cry for you,
I wont try to hide.
I can't win this battle,
I've tried many times.
I can't be okay when
everyone says,
I am not good enough.

{~~*~~}

{&}Love*liesOfBeauty~[NowColdInMyHand]
{`~Emily~`}

Amic
Junior Member

since 2008-02-17

Posts 39
...I think Im lost again...

1 posted 2008-04-15 05:43 PM

Good Job! I can relate, I hope it gets better.

hiddensmiles
Senior Member

since 2008-02-07

Posts 514
at the beach... i wish

2 posted 2008-04-15 06:04 PM

nice write!

Falling rain

Member Elite

since 2008-01-31

Posts 2178
Small town, Illinois

3 posted 2008-04-15 06:10 PM

wow i haven't read a poem of yours that somewhat rhymed!! this is pretty good.

~Zach~

Earl Robertson
Senior Member

since 2008-01-21

Posts 753
BC, Canada

4 posted 2008-04-15 06:19 PM

I'm Speechless! WOW

"Be Strong and Always Remember what made you you." Earl

"Ooo!!! Ooo!! I know! I know! um...he he" Earl
(Yes I am crazy)

x-tears-x
Junior Member

since 2008-04-13

Posts 43
England

5 posted 2008-04-15 08:48 PM

Lovely poem!

XxForever.BrokenxX
Senior Member

since 2008-01-20

Posts 891
Neverland

6 posted 2008-04-17 11:09 PM

Thanks, im glad u liked it.

{~~*~~}

{&}Love*liesOfBeauty~[NowColdInMyHand]
{`~Emily~`}

Belinda
Member

since 2006-01-30

Posts 126
UK

7 posted 2008-04-21 06:05 PM

some battles will never be won.
great write, really enjoyed it.

you are very talented.

Belinda~*

Expect nothing, Prepare for anything.

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