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Teen Poetry #8

Feel These Words

Clockwork_Orange
Senior Member

since 2007-03-23

Posts 620
Space Camp, IN

0 posted 2008-06-25 10:07 PM

i want you to feel these words
because there all that i have left
there bleeding onto this paper
in a blotchy mess

my trembling hand cant seem to find
these words i really feel
broken on the cold hard floor
i dont think ill heal

so turn out the light
and close your eyes
ill be thinking of you
every single night

and its a shame
that i cant say
all these things
i ment to say

i want you to know i miss you
with everything i am
its burning me and i cant breath
i really need a hand

[This message has been edited by Clockwork_Orange (06-26-2008 02:26 PM).]

hunnie_girl

Member Elite

since 2006-06-18

Posts 2567
Canada

1 posted 2008-06-25 11:32 PM

Bryan you are soo amazing

I love this!!
Krysti

RevengeIsMine
Senior Member

since 2006-07-08

Posts 820
Australia

2 posted 2008-06-26 02:29 PM

OMG.. i'm crying... if this is ment for me.. then i'm gunna keep crying.. u have the most wonderful talent... i' m not sure what else to say... except for I'm here.. n i always will be...

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