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Teen Poetry #8

My Love....

Dark Star
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since 2008-02-20

Posts 392
Lost in your eyes

0 posted 2008-08-22 08:11 PM

The sweet taste of your love
tingles within my veins ever so gentile
your the candle that brightens my heart
While I think of you,
my love

xoxo-

SEA

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Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

1 posted 2008-08-22 09:07 PM

this is so soft and sweet

really very nice

Earl Robertson
Senior Member

since 2008-01-21

Posts 753
BC, Canada

2 posted 2008-08-22 10:13 PM

yeah that's the word for it, soft. Not exactly warm but, hey I like it!

Be who you are
And say what you feel
'Cause those who mind don't matter
And those who matter don't mind
-Dr Suess

BeyaK
Member

since 2008-08-07

Posts 126
Philippines

3 posted 2008-08-23 11:37 AM

soft and sweet poem... but love reading it

~~*K. B.*~~

Just.Another.Falling.Star
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since 2008-05-08

Posts 422
Canada

4 posted 2008-08-23 11:51 AM

short and sweet...to say it simply.

~*Julianna*~

"You don't know me...but I know you. That's all that matters right now... Mr.Rainey!" - Secret Window

Dark Star
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since 2008-02-20

Posts 392
Lost in your eyes

5 posted 2008-08-26 07:42 PM

thnx everyone for your thoughtful remarks about my poem

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