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Teen Poetry #8

Forgiven By One...Hated By All

Just.Another.Falling.Star
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since 2008-05-08

Posts 422
Canada

0 posted 2008-08-29 09:11 AM

A little problem once occured,
Where I was stuck in hell.
I said some things I actually meant,
And was forgiven by one...
But hated by all.

It doesn't stop,
All the harassing and cursing,
Death glares and troubled actions.
All because I was forgiven by one...
And still hated by all.

So this isn't my best work at all. I was just feeling like posting something so tell me if it's good or not and if I should add more.

~*Julianna*~

"You don't know me...but I know you. That's all that matters right now... Mr.Rainey!" - Secret Window

Falling rain

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since 2008-01-31

Posts 2178
Small town, Illinois

1 posted 2008-08-29 03:57 PM

First nice poem.. second I think it would be fine as it is.. but I would like to read more...

"Only in darkness can we see the stars.
And only there is it darkest before the dawn."

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