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GothicCherry
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0 posted 2008-09-18 05:18 PM


Freedom From Fragility
Will Never Come My Way
Freedom From Frivolities
Is Non-Existing In A Way.
I Still Try To Live My Life
In The Best Manner Possible
Though in My Dreams I Find That I-
And I Alone-
Am The Cause Of My Own Pain
Away and At Home.


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freeand2sexy
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1 posted 2008-09-18 09:48 PM

Its not lame. I liked it

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2 posted 2008-09-24 07:06 PM

I agree its not lame.. its short and sweet.. good job!
GothicCherry
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3 posted 2008-09-25 11:22 AM

I appreciate you all's comments but i still think it to be lame. sorry
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