A Midsummer Nights Dream Become My Reality

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Teen Poetry #8

A Midsummer Nights Dream Become My Reality

Just.Another.Falling.Star
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since 2008-05-08

Posts 422
Canada

0 posted 2008-11-14 07:42 PM

Sitting there in that uncomfy chair,
is someone who holds my heart.
Across the room he looks into
my eyes,
and once again I melt.
I don't know how to tell you,
tell you that I love you.

Shakespear's words are not enough,
for the feelings I have for you.
And as we speak this old english
tale do you realize how true those words are?
"I'll follow thee and make a heaven
of hell, to die upon the hand
I love so well."

This story slowly unfolds,
and we grow closer together
as these words between Hermia and Demetrius,
slowly become ours...

(quote from Shakespear's "A Midsummer Nights Dream")

.:~]Julianna[~:.

"Somewhere under the rainbow...there will be thunderstorms."

Falling rain

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since 2008-01-31

Posts 2178
Small town, Illinois

1 posted 2008-11-14 09:18 PM

AWWWW!!! I know who that special someone of yours is to so i can't help but smiling while reading this! hahaha! Its so adorable and cute of you to write this, hehe. Great work!

-Zachy

I'D RATHER BE ANYTHING BUT ORDINARY!!!! XP

Just.Another.Falling.Star
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since 2008-05-08

Posts 422
Canada

2 posted 2008-11-14 11:23 PM

lol, thanks so much zach!!! i needed something to write to get over my writers block, so i wrote this. while i was typing away, i was soooo giddy and i couldn't stop smiling, lol. i felt so stupid, haha. but thats okay.
hmm...i love to think about that person, lol...

.:~]Julianna[~:.

"Somewhere under the rainbow...there will be thunderstorms."

I am the arch angel
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since 2008-02-02

Posts 167
nowhere,illinois,USA

3 posted 2008-11-16 12:39 PM

wow, that one quote with heaven and hell and i can't quite remember because i'm in a rush but it was amazing....great job

much love,

keagan a.k.a I am the arch angel

Just.Another.Falling.Star
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since 2008-05-08

Posts 422
Canada

4 posted 2008-11-16 09:40 AM

thanks so much! and yeah, thats got to be my favorite quote from the entire play. it was quit something while we were reading it, lol.

.:~]Julianna[~:.

"Somewhere under the rainbow...there will be thunderstorms."

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