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hunnie_girl
since 2006-06-18
Posts 2567Canada |
it hurts that you daon't say hi anymore, but I don't stop you from walking I know the score, It hurts to know I let you go, I have nothing left not even my pride to show, It hurts to know I love you still, but i'll walk away, I know the drill, maybe one day we can be friends one more time, I might still love you but that isn't a crime. |
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buttercupbaby Member
since 2006-05-03
Posts 400outside in the rain |
Hola Hunnie! i must say i can defiantly relate to this poem...don't we all usually say that?  but i really do relate to this..saddly. I know the feeling, and you put it into words for both of us[probably more] which is miraculous!!!I do like this poem, it's kind of like a really short story....=] BUT i can say this is not my favorite of yours,and i don't understand a few of the words you used to make others rhyme.. but i still like it! -missy |
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wwzwlmd8 Member
since 2006-09-23
Posts 96San Diego,CA |
I liked I not the best but It was good and don't stop doing what you do best. wwzwlmd!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! |
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