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Teen Poetry #8
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thinktwice
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0 posted 2007-01-28 06:58 PM


Give into sweet surrender
  Tasting sugar sweet lips
   Slip around the the glassy edge
    Diverting shallow sorrow
     into the cunundrum
      Deception continues
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1 posted 2007-01-29 11:25 PM

I though this was very short more like a long hmmm metaphor but... with more length this could be made into a great poem....
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~fool me once shame on you, fool me twice shame on me~
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