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Teen Poetry #8

Piece of Heaven

Gravymoose
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since 2006-12-24

Posts 4

0 posted 2007-02-26 07:14 PM

So I made a poem of three tercets since I don't see too many of those. Hope you enjoy.

Piece of Heaven

I gaze into a crystal sea;
Your deep blue eyes gaze back at me
With returned smiles of joy and glee.

Each day together is a dream;
One with no end so it would seem
I cherish it, our perfect team

Like a piece of heaven you are
My only one, my shining star.
Our love extends forever far.

hunnie_girl

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since 2006-06-18

Posts 2567
Canada

1 posted 2007-02-26 11:56 PM

I liked this I thought it was really sweet..
hunnie

~fool me once shame on you, fool me twice shame on me~

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