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Teen Poetry #8

Teenage Disease

jayjara
Member

since 2007-05-02

Posts 90
Florida

0 posted 2007-05-10 08:44 PM

Flippin' through pages of my Bi-ble
no one ever told me, i was li-a-ble,
for the ones I can't define
i must sacrifice, something of mine.
Now, what you hear is fami-li-ar
and time can't aid my bare
back issues we can relate to,
but obviously,
like a teenage disease
can't help but plead,
for a chance of crime;
a lil bit of popped cherries,
on-a-dime.
And this is just-is, what it-is,
can't be wrong, its just love
just-love is a game of
tears behind a smile leaving
no secret but straight-forward to
keepin' the silence awkward,
ignoring "best" friends
to last another weekend
so we can stay up late,
check mate, home run;
but the lust in you, so just in you
one-more-kiss before the sun.

-J

pen&paper
Senior Member

since 2006-06-06

Posts 513

1 posted 2007-05-26 08:20 AM

I really liked this. It was really good. The rhyming didn't seem forced at all. Good write.

p.s. "Give me your worst"

Pen

RenaissanceRomanceRunsRed
Senior Member

since 2007-06-11

Posts 1062
In Love <3

2 posted 2007-06-14 07:16 AM

i think it's just me- it must be but i can't follow it, it was very intuiging i wish my mind was working this morning so i could follow it, but alsas somethings are not to be.

very nice job.

-Red

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